Im sending you this line to show
that my Revulsion has
crossed itself into Love.
And Id like if yours did too so that
I dont have to go back to despising
your existence within my own.
You drove your insults into the depths of a certain,
complex organ in my interior design
and its not quite as simple as that.
You pulled my hair to the point of seduction
and glared with the intensity of a thousand burning suns
after feeling the Thousand Island dressing I
poured down your shirt.
You took your little helicopter into the skies and broke
my hearts Sound Barrier. The only blood line
in my anatomy that didnt exist.
And, in the least of words,
you have driven me to passion
and it suits me to write this to show you
that I dont want to asphyxiate you anymore.














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also, i'm of the school of thought that says that poems should express the unexpressable, which is to say that they should be about way more than one thing at once. you juggled the emotions extremely well in this piece, and made it very relatable as well; how many times i've been in "lovehate" with someone i can't tell you.
rock the fuck on, lady. loved it.
ps. way to matchmake.
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If I killed one man, I killed two.
i actually haven't been in lovehate before. well, maybe once in grade school but that lasted for what? two hours?
thank you XD
p.s. totally.
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Heres a bumper sticker Id like to see: We are the proud parents of a child whos self-esteem is sufficient that he doesnt need us promoting his minor scholastic achievements on the back of our car.
-George Carlin
anyway, it was nice. i still have to look up what asphyxiate means thou.
toodles!
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...that's what she said.
asphyxiate means to choke.
toodles? wtf?
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Heres a bumper sticker Id like to see: We are the proud parents of a child whos self-esteem is sufficient that he doesnt need us promoting his minor scholastic achievements on the back of our car.
-George Carlin
i know. i went onto dictionary.com after reading it.
toodles cuz i felt like i needed to say a 3rd thing and toodles is what popped into my mind first.
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...that's what she said.
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Heres a bumper sticker Id like to see: We are the proud parents of a child whos self-esteem is sufficient that he doesnt need us promoting his minor scholastic achievements on the back of our car.
-George Carlin
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